If it were up to you, how would you improve the image?
Retouching will be based on your critique. Feel free to leave comments.
P.S.
Courteousness and politeness is very much appreciated. Don't leave ugly comments directed against the subject. Be friendly. :)
9 comments:
How could you leave ugly comments on the subject? Such a beutiful woman.
One thing that I think tricks the eye is the dark towel that she is laying on, in confuses where she starts and the towel ends. Not much you can do with it at this point though. Also desaturation of the water I think would help a bit, more attention to the woman.
Photoshop? I'd probably boost Saturation just a little, say, Apply a Velvia Action to add around 30-50% to your color.
I'd probably, apply lens blur to the background.
I'd probably also apply a little warming filter to the image.
Thanks gary and dave, I'll take you comments into account. :)
i think i'd crop it and apply the rule of thirds, correct the horizon and lomonize it, sorry =) i'm a lomo fan.
http://spiritbeing.t35.com/images/Karla.jpg
I agree with Gary about the towel, can't tell what is her hair and what is the towel. Other than that I think the picture is really good! Now if it were a pic for me I'd have a male subject, but that's just me! :D
Dierdre
i don't like the cropped version (my opinion)
i would desaturate the water (that is a good idea)
maybe give her some more definition (high pass filter on soft light)
and maybe increase her ... eyes (what were you thinking) to make her more expressive
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